Sam+S.+and+Mary+E.

tell me this isnt an awesome pic. story time! Cool. This guy looks to me like a winner of the ancient Olimpics. Lets begin. MaryElizabeth's

Alright. It looks like your writing needs some correction. Just a heads up, but it looks good so far. Also, it says that his family came to the event when women and children couldn't come to the olympics. You might want to clarify on that.

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